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Poem
"Unspoken spring"

My love for you is buried in a dead ground
in the land of ^I love you too^.


My desire for you is expanded into the wind
in the land of ^I feel you too^.


My dreams for you are shining on the sky
in the land of ^I dream you too^.


My silence for you is attached to the river
in the land of ^I miss you too^.


My hopes for you have flourished in the 
garden in the land of ^I wait you too^.
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Literature
Poem
"Desert wind"

Here i am in the desert

created by your heartless hurricane,
gathering petals of flowers.

In every petal i'll hide single tear.

I'll take away them  in the safest part
of the universe,
where your emptiness cannot reach.


I'll ask the stars to spread their glow
to your heart and inform you,
that there still has love for you
in the tears hidden in
flower petals.


I'll ask the sky to flood the desert
in your heart.
I'll ask the moon
does there still has light to.


Then i'll come to gather flowers and glow
to build an garden
in the furthest part of the universe,
where sadness cannot reach.

The essence or the heart of this poem is crucial.Accepting love or the hardiness and the gentleness of it is the importance of emotions expressed in it.The aim is to touch your hearts.Your suggestions,thoughts o
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Narcissistic love
"Narcissistic love"
Don't be silly 
I was born to see your smile
My heart is created to meet yours
Your soul was in search for mine
Don't be silly
The night sky is not beautiful because
the stars are shining so bright
Your love makes thoese to
shine brighter
Hah
Don't be silly
The tempest doesn't lift up the waves
My desire for you and your desire for
me are playing in the wind
Hah
Don't be silly
You love me more than i love you
Hah don't be silly
I love you more than you love me
Hah
Don't be silly
We are meant to be
Hah
Don't be silly
We are in love


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be authentic, multi-dimensional, varied and balanced
take into consideration the diversity of the artists being critiqued, as well as the many contexts in whi
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"Unspoken spring"



My love for you is buried in a dead ground
in the land of ^I love you too^.


My desire for you is expanded into the wind
in the land of ^I feel you too^.


My dreams for you are shining on the sky
in the land of ^I dream you too^.


My silence for you is attached to the river
in the land of ^I miss you too^.


My hopes for you have flourished in the 
garden in the land of ^I wait you too^.


"Desert wind"



Here i am in the desert

created by your heartless hurricane,
gathering petals of flowers.

In every petal i'll hide single tear.


I'll take away them  in the safest part
of the universe,
where your emptiness cannot reach.


I'll ask the stars to spread their glow
to your heart and inform you,
that there still has love for you
in the tears hidden in
flower petals.


I'll ask the sky to flood the desert
in your heart.
I'll ask the moon
does there still has light to.


Then i'll come to gather flowers and glow
to build an garden
in the furthest part of the universe,
where sadness cannot reach.




The essence or the heart of this poem is crucial.Accepting love or the hardiness and the gentleness of it is the importance of emotions expressed in it.The aim is to touch your hearts.Your suggestions,thoughts opinions are most welcome.
In which poetry style would you classify this poem?
Did it touched your hearts?
What was your first thought during reading it?
Thank you

"Narcissistic love"


Don't be silly 

I was born to see your smile
My heart is created to meet yours
Your soul was in search for mine
Don't be silly
The night sky is not beautiful because
the stars are shining so bright
Your love makes thoese to
shine brighter
Hah
Don't be silly
The tempest doesn't lift up the waves
My desire for you and your desire for
me are playing in the wind
Hah
Don't be silly
You love me more than i love you
Hah don't be silly
I love you more than you love me
Hah
Don't be silly
We are meant to be
Hah
Don't be silly
We are in love



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ZiMagateophobia Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
こんにちわ~!pink heart bullet

Ahh, I see that you are interested in poetry~ pink heart bullet I love to write, but I have never really covered poetry myself, actually! ^^ Fanfictions and roleplays, but never poetry. And it is a very admirable thing to write about! pink heart bullet So many emotions and situations that could be interpreted! pink heart bulletpink heart bulletpink heart bullet 

I hope you find your stay with us most pleasant. Please reach out to us to help make you feel more at home! ^^ pink heart bulletpink heart bulletpink heart bullet
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CreativesoulQ Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2017  New Deviant
Thanks.
Poetry is field where the heart realizes its essence.
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Most certainly!! pink heart bullet I hope you do very well in developing your literary skills! ^^ pink heart bulletpink heart bulletpink heart bullet
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